Creating Strong and Interesting Writing:(Part One)
How to do it? Easy, it is a piece of cake; writing will be interesting if you make it exactly as the way people speak. People speak use active sentences rather than passive sentences. It is simpler than written report. Let me give you few examples:
Passive:
I was told by my mother to go to buy some cookies.
Active:
My mother asked me to buy some cookies.
Important:
Anyway, passive voices are not all bad. They can be very useful when the doer of the action is unknown, the object is more important than the doer and when it is shorter than active sentences.
It is interesting to note that passive voice is definite and it is not being questioned and always Dictators write or speak using it. For example:
It has been noted that you will be fired by the end of this month.
I talked to Azrina few hours ago, I woke up early today 10 am something to watch over my kiddo, thats what I promised my wife yesterday though still sleepy. We talked about how sucks Malaysians political matters nowadays, her coming baby, going back to Malaysia and my visa.
Her advice is good, I considered and it is well kept in my heart, I wont let those assholes get me again but the main thing is that I need to settle this matter with myself first which I did few days ago. Anyway thank you for the advice. Dont worry my friend, I am in the process of writing an E book for the beginning, few translations projects, few verses to be remembered, few languages to be learned. Many actually hehehe.
Oh ya thanks to my student Chacun, for keep reading my blog. Perhaps after this, she will put her first effort by commenting mine pieces of minds here. Dont worry, its your thoughts that matter to me, not your 1119 qualities.
Dalam pada aku cuba mendapatkan sahabat sahabat seperjuangan yang akan membantu aku menewaskan dajal dajal durjana kelak, aku dapati tidak ada sesiapa pun yang boleh aku percayai, lidah mereka begitu lantang berbicara tetapi malangnya tidak pada hati, tidak pada kekuatan jiwa. Bukan tugas aku di sini menjadi khawarij yang gemar menjatuhkan hukum kerana komplikasi dan definisi iman yang begitu rumit, tetapi sekadar peringatan buat diriku agar kelak aku tidak akan merasa kecewa yang amat sangat.
Itulah mereka, bangsa padang pasir yang kuat asabiyahnya.. namun dalam apa yang berlaku pada aku hari ini, tidak begitu, meskipun keadaannya senantiasa begitu. Yang dapat aku rumuskan mereka ini begitu mementingkan diri sendiri.
Kekecewaan Ishak kini dapat aku fahami. Arab gagal, total. Noktah. Usahkan menyelamatkan Palestin, membina semula kekuatan diri sendiri pun belum tentu mereka mampu.
Al Magdi dan inspirasi keluarganya untuk mencari sesuap nasi, lari dari kemiskinan negara miskin Mesir yang tidak mampu untuk membina hatta permainan musim Ramadhan, yang digelar Fawanis, bergantung sepenuhnya kepada China.
Bantulah kami Ya Allah.