Biopsychosocial Approach in Assessing Students

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Prism Model:

 

Overcoming this problem is not as simple as it is as firstly, teacher must make sense of the elements of Prism Model to CLD students learning. If teacher fails to address the real issue, it will be out of focus. It is like the wrong prescription is given for students and it is dangerous. CLD students might have problem in language or linguistic, but immersing them into extensive programs of reading might not be a great help as the main concern for them is lack of motivation to attend the reading classes which is related to sociocultural challenges. He/She might be uncomfortable sitting in that reading class due to the fact that reading activities provided specifically focus on individual rather than group works. A sensitive teacher will provide activities that can fit into his/her students biography.

 

In order for teacher to use Prism Model in order to suit the need of CLD students, teacher can do focus on the aspect of :

 

Academic Challenges:

Teacher needs to realize that most of academic and concepts can be transferred to second language from CLD students’ first language. Teacher needs to  techniques that can help to smoothen up this transfer during assessment, for example, providing para professional help or translator. It is important as well teacher knows previous education that students receive as teacher will not water down and make it easy too students. They will not be motivated as it is not challenging enough.

 

Cognitive Development:

Knowing the preferences on students types of intelligences are important as it will help teacher to provide teaching material or activities that can help them boost best their grasp of understanding of teacher’s lessons. For example, preparing lots of graphics and mind maps for virtual learners.

 

Language Development:

Knowing the language aspect of students in order to help them transferring L1 knowledge to L2 so that students will be able to learn better. For example, the phonemes or phonetics similarities, cognates and etc. I also realize knowing students level of second language acquisition is important too. For example, if the above students is in preproduction stage in his writing but  intermediate fluency stage in his speaking skills, then the teacher must provide lessons/activities that suit his/her level of development.

 

 

Socio and Cultural Processes:

I am thinking using text/ assessment that is related to students sociocultural process can help to enhance learning. If students come from a culture that highly collective society might perform better in assessment that use performance based assessment with peer involvements or play based assessment.

 

 

Biopsychosial Approach:

 

Researching about Biopsychosocial Approach, it mentions that in order to understand patient, it is very important to understand the three aspects of them. Biological,Psychological and social aspects of a patient is interrelated and can lead to the wreckage of the whole beings. In relation to Biopsychosocial Approach towards CLD students, teacher will explore these three aspects  in related to CLD students. For example:

 

a) Bio :

You notice students of yours always ask questions on whatever you write on whiteboard and it is only him rather than the whole class. You might suspect him having problem with his eyesight. First, you might want to ask him to sit in front to see either his eyesight improve or not. If it does not change, you might ask him to see you and interview him asking for clarification. If it is positive, then you might want him to go for a check up.

 

Anyway, this process of asking him to go to the treatment  will involve other consideration or probability  such as he might not see a optometrist if he comes from a poor family, or a single parent student that need to divide his/her time/money between studying and meeting other financial needs of his/her families.

 

b)Psych:

Let us take the same case as above, it will affect his performance in class thinking about his inability to follow lessons as he needs to get his eyes checked and it will cost/trouble his mother to find/get money  for him. He will be stress and put him into anxiety and depression.

 

c) Socio:

Thinking about the problem above, teacher might want to know further by setting up a committee that can look into the student’s problem in order to gather help. A committee might have a social visit to the students house in order to get more information on questions such as:

 

-        the depth /seriousness of the problem related to family financial capabilities

-        help/aid that they might receive.

-        Access to private practitioner/doctors.

 

It means both is used to understand what CLD students inside out, its like investigating in order to understand and help teacher to plan instructional design for CLD students.

 

 

Pre Assessment Tool: Mind Map of Self

 

The main idea of having pre assessment tool is to gather information as much as possible  so that teacher can see below the iceberg. This can be done informally by asking them later to discuss and share whatever that they write/draw with classmates. While individual student presents, teacher will jot down the thoughts that students transfer such as their preferences, background knowledge, level of second language acquisition and etc. This can be used to make connection to students’ biography cards/mind maps.

 

Students will be put randomly in groups and will be given a piece of paper each, individually. It has a mind map that has few branches asking them to them out, information pertaining to themselves that they are willing to share. They are being told that they can draw pictures, or they can write anything that they like. They are given the ideas that they can add the branches by putting anything else that they like on their own. Later they are going to share this with their classmates.

 

 

 

 

 

 

References:

 

Herrera,S.G.,&Murry,K.G.,& Cabral,R.M Assessment and Accommodations For Classroom Teachers of Culturally and Linguistically Diverse Students. Boston, MA, Allyn and Bacon.

 

Herrera,S.G.,Perez,D.R&Escamilla,K. Teaching Reading to English Language Learners: Differentiatied Literacies. Boston,MA, Allyn and Bacon.

 

Herrera,S.G & Murry,K.G Mastering ESL and Bilingual Methods: Differentiated Instruction for Culturally and Linguistically Diverse(CLD) Students. Boston,MA,Allyn and Bacon.

Reading and Reflection

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Observation:
I found this particular paragraph from a book. It mentions knowledge about reading and writing. The paragraph says: “When a skilled student encounters a word, she or he recognizes it quickly and zeroes in on the appropriate meaning. For instance, in the sentence “The thief lifted the rock from the jewelry case”, a skilled reader likely can tell immediately from the context that the rock refers to a precious gem. Struggling students will make inefficient guesses at the letter-sound, word and meaning level that produce lots of irrelevant associations. They are unable to pare down these associations to make appropriate sense of what they are reading or writing (Pressley, 2006). Not surprisingly, the development of writing relies on many of the same abilities as reading: understanding how letters and sounds work, understanding how letters and sounds work, understanding how letters and words combine into sentences and larger pieces of text and meaning, using vocabulary and prior knowledge, and writing for different purposes (Shanahan,2006). Students who expend all of their effort figuring out letters, words and sentences are limited in ways they are able to attend to the sense or message of what they are writing.”1

Feelings:
Happy
Relief
Confident

Thoughts:
I feel happy after reading these two paragraphs because it validates the four chapters that I have been reading that deals about Literacy or Teaching Reading to English Language Learners. I feel relief because this paragraph summarizes the four chapters that I read. I feel confident as now I can see bigger picture of what I have been reading for the past weeks.

Step One:
I had an assumption that reading skills were easy to grab by students. Everybody could be a good reader as long as he knows the letters of targeted language. I had an assumption students could not become good readers simply because they were lazy. I assumed literacy means literate/being able to read.

Step Two:
For a long time, I believe reading skills are easy to teach to students but in fact, they are not!! Reading involves more than one step process. Motivation and schemata play vital role in assisting reading and understanding too. Not just that, students must be able to make reader- text connection to understand the text. It means reading is not just the ability to decode text like a parrot. It leads me to think that reading is a part of literacy if the reader can derive meanings from the text.

Step Three:
Before, I am convinced that students who recognize the letters in targeted language will not have problem with reading but I was wrong. I believed in that because when I was young, I could read after remembering all the Roman letters. It should not be my bench mark because though I could read at that moment, I realized still I could not make sense of most material that I read. I still need my mom’s explanation to understand Alice in Wonderland’s story and what ever I uttered from the book. I remembered how motivated I was when reading Alice in Wonderland’s story that had pictures. How powerful it was my experiences of reading when I was small could shape my perceptions on reading and literacy.

Applications:
Step One:After reading few chapters on Reading and Literacy, I feel like having lots of new perspectives on the topic. I realize only by understanding what is Literacy and Reading will help me to teach my future students better of the concepts and the applications. I tend to appreciate the complex and dynamic reading process that happen inside my students’ brains and willing to assist them because I realize how difficult it is to nurture the reading skills to them. I feel I have grown personally because after knowing and understanding the reading process, I feel so excited to be an active reader.

Step Two: Reading above paragraph that I put in Observation can reflect my own teaching in many aspects. Firstly, I will set a good example by modeling a good reading habit that reflects my deep understanding of the reading process itself. This can be done by sharing my reading materials with my students the ways it suits them. I must find something that is their preference. Secondly, as reading is a very difficult process, I will not be easily frustrated. I will nurture my students need accordingly as I understand reading and literacy is interactive. I will help my students to have various strategies and help them to adapt accordingly to the strategies that suits them. The main thing is to create opportunities for them to explore literacy so that it is meaningful to them.

References:
1.Conley, M.W. Content Area Literacy : Learners in Context.Boston: Allyn and Bacon,2008.

refleksi penting ( rujuk masa depan untuk plan )

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Nothing much happened today, as I am struggling finishing up my reading on Racism. This time I have to submit my reflection on Gail L. Thompson book titled; ” Through Ebony Eyes: What teachers need to know but are afraid to ask about African- American students”.

I invited few friends for dinner this coming Sunday, all of them are sisters as my wife will conduct it.

I sigh a lot due to excessive tiredness, thinking of books that I have to finish up. At the same time thinking about my  books that I suppose to write. I have not touched them for months.

Outside, wind is strong, I wonder when the snows will come as Nebraska is embracing by them. Will it next week. As for preparation, I think we are ahead two weeks, but I have to buy a burner, who knows electricity might go off during the coming ice storm, nauzubillah.

I gain so much weight, no exercise this late hour of end of semester. Busy.

Be careful, be careful and be careful.. ( ini ingat sendiri sebab aku sendiri tak mahu cerita, ianya berkaitan dengan Q2 permintaan kawan yang ingin membuka jaringan, juga menjawab persoalan aku kenapa ianya tidak diupdate untuk sekian lama, ianya juga berkaitan dengan penganalisaan terhadap diri sendiri dan daya reflektif sekeliling utk mencari hawari hawari yang boleh membantu, hingga kini tidak ku temui..sigh…mengeluh..)

Juga some planning for Irfan. I learn from Dr Mustaqi, actually from my observation that Education is everything. He is smart indeed, patutlah lecturer engines civil kat UPM sebagaimana yang dikatakan olehnya ada banyak tak puas hati, sebab critical..heheheh…

oh, aku kira musim penghijrahan telah berakhir bagi burung burung di kawasan Northern Hemisphere ini, ternyata, sebenarnya tidak.. beberapa minit lagi kedengaran di angkasa burung burung itu bersuara seperti angsa lelah..memang angsa agaknya..kadang kadang takut juga aku apabila mengingatkan terjadinya peristiwa Tsunami di Acheh, di mana haiwan haiwan lari dahulu..Nauzubillah..

dan hari ni aku kira hari terakhir aku menggunakan Facebook dan Yahoo Messenger. Insha Allah , ameen..

Teaching HIspanic Students: Required Reading Response

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“I don’t care about race. I care about the class ,the children they work with..”Dr. Be Stoney

I believe this is a must to read book before teaching in Hispanic classroom. In my case, I never have any opportunity to know, learn or interact with Hispanic, Latinos or Latinas cultures, so this will provide a pre schematic knowledge on them. I believe it will enrich my perspectives as an educator. As I reflect back to a question asked by Dr Stoney to me by asking me what does it mean to be Malay, so I believe as an educator, I have to put pure and conscious efforts not just to critically checking my beliefs on other cultures but at the same time reform and change erroneous and prejudice beliefs towards everybody especially to students.

Actually it emphasize on preparation to be teacher in diversified classroom. In Malaysia, I don’t have Hispanic students, but the strategy provided here will be good guidelines, on how should I prepare to teach my students whose have different backgrounds and understanding. Furthermore, I am a diamond cutter. Thus, it is my job to dig for them and polish them. The reform must be erupted now and then, and I don’t have to wait. It is in Malaysia’s National Education Philosophy a long time ago. Rigorous action needs to be implemented.

This book is about a belief that through education, teachers will be able to turn the history of diversity and multiculturalism in United States to be a success story. It puts emphasis on teachers. Teachers as agents, selling knowledge and students as clients, receiving education. Our target is to reap benefits from this long term investment. We want to make a successful deal. Education is supposed to be a win win situation deal: towards a betterment of our society. It means every one of us can live effectively and respectfully in a cultural diverse society. Also, the writers challenged their notions and assumptions that teachers are perfectly prepared and happy, ready and caring when it comes to educating their students regardless of their background. After finishing this book, the answers for their assumptions are answered by finding out about guidance and strategies provided. Thanks to the writers because putting me into realization that to reap the benefit of this business deal is a long way to go.

I can say that because I did try to answer Question Number 3 on Beliefs about Hispanic Students in Chapter Two. It was difficult because at the end I realize all my answers for the questions were either wrong, biased and they are based on movies. The only answer that I had a confidence to answer was related to their language that they use a same Spanish language. Even this is proven wrong when I reflect back to the discussion in a classroom when one of our classmates explained to us that Puerto Rican Spanish is different from Mexicans Spanish. The only correct answer I know is Jennifer Lopez is a Latina!! Shame on me…

They have a long history. When I counted back, it started from 1492 and it goes on until today. They have more than 500 years of history. It means their cultures are rich of many elements. It is complete; they went through many patterns of oppressions but yet did not stay static. Dynamically they fought to embrace, tasting the meaning of freedom and equality. It means also, they have similar basic needs as human. Yet I wonder what makes them being perceived as difficult in classrooms? Does it show that when teachers always perceive themselves as bearer of equality and justice yet when realizing that in fact we engage in putting prior negative assumptions about a group of students, this lead us to state of denial? As a result of this we put the blame on the failure of bilingual education, not to our own effort of knowing in and out of our students?

I believe as nations that have long history and enriched with many diverse elements within it, they are indeed unique. I soon realized about it when realizing they came from different places such as Puerto Rico, Mexico, Bolivia, Cuba and etc. I wonder what will happen to me if I address a Puerto Rican as Mexican realizing that they are a part of U.S territory for about 100 years. They are American citizens. This means they have unique status compared to other arrivals. It goes the same with Cuban American that came here running away from communist system. They were well educated mostly asking for political asylum. Their mentality would be different. Indeed I find that diversity is not necessarily between different groups but it can happen within intergroup as well. Enough to say, Mejicanos, Tejanos, Chicanos reflect how diverse and unique they are because those words bring different meaning.1

The book focus on Hispanic students, it helps you theoretically to create a mental image of how a Hispanic student would look like/be. It starts from demographics data, reflections of our (majority) beliefs about them (in chapter 2), teaching Hispanic students, understanding Hispanic families (in chapter 3). It is complete. I believe this is crucial because the authors actually are trying to tell readers (teachers especially) to know students as a whole. Knowing name, address and grade is as important as understanding and knowing their history and culture. It also helps us by letting us know what to do and to avoid when it comes to practice later on. This notion is obvious when the writers provide Resource Heaven for readers because you can extent your research and knowledge about them by using the books, fictions and research provided inside this chapter.

Other thing that I like about this book is when the authors provide their own experiences into Authors’ Notes. I value their efforts because basically they are providing hands on applications because teaching Hispanic students was an alien concept to me. Further more, this puts facts and theories discussed in this book in an imaginable context thus lead to understanding. Most of them are related to chapters discussed. As an example, Mary Lou Fuller in Chapter 7, which discuss about Hispanic Families gave a good tip to prepare/bring cookies for the students whenever they are being visited at home. This will be identified and celebrated as concerning effort from a teacher to the students by Hispanic parents. Building this bridge will smoothen the process of knowing and understanding them, and as teachers for Hispanic group, it is important for teachers to initiate first the steps.

As I mentioned before, this book will be a strong base of my next plan. It provides frameworks for my future task as an English teacher and at the same time multiculturalists when I go back home. I don’t have any intention to stay firm following exactly as the way it is in Malaysia now. It does not work for unity when the system supports racism. As we build up/contribute to pollution, we too help building up racism if we don’t put an end to it. All of us have shares and that’s why, there must be a strong reform. Furthermore, I realize equality and freedom is the basic human needs, and I will have supporters. “It is important for us teachers, those who understand to put a stop to racism”. I do realize as well, there will be antagonists that will strain upon my way. They might inflict pain upon me but that does not worry me much. I have read how Martin Luther King and El Hajj El Malik Shabazz2 were killed; I have seen what Apartheid did to Nelson Mandela. Physically they were incarcerated, but their struggles and souls fly upon to the heart of alive human. No force can stop them.

The writers focus on education to change and up heave the Hispanic community. Education can only work if it is conveyed successfully to the target groups. In order to achieve that, the language barrier must be broken down by improving bilingual education. In bilingual education, we appreciate the culture of our students. Appreciating culture of others and not denying their existence is cores to ensure unity. It is like killing two birds with a stone. Hispanic students wont be lag behind, their identity wont be jeopardized and at the same time they learn other subjects. This idea is very beautiful. When I reflect back of my experiences in Malaysia, I realize among the many reasons Chinese or Indian parents send their kids to Chinese and Tamil vernacular school because they don’t want their offspring to be “Malaynalized”. I remembered when I was 10 years old in Standard Four, most of the stories in our National Language Text books, told about Malay fairytales, Malay warriors, Malay legends, and I did know about Na Zha3 and the flying wheel of fire from comic books instead from “National” text books. I guess no efforts were being made to translate Chinese or Indian fairytales. It is an obvious example of how students’ cultures are not celebrated and welcomed.

I like Chapter 5 the most. This semester I am taking ESL Bilingual Education, as what I am being taught in the subject, it is important to have accurate assessment to ensure academic success. It is interesting to note here that our bilingual students might use two languages at one time but most of the time, there will be only one dominant language within them. It means proficiency is very much dependent on the language that they are familiar with. In order to ensure success for Hispanic students, the assessments made by school personnel must be exact. This is to avoid them to be replaced in a classroom where they can speak English but do not understand most of the lessons because their Cognitive Academic Language Proficiency is not on par with Native American English speakers. This is to ensure they are not left behind or being felt to be left behind because of their language inadequacy. Also, accurate assessment must examine all aspects of students to ensure it is adequate. Among the criteria that need to be taken seriously are Performance based assessments, observation by focusing on language used to interact with peers and not to forget the demographic of the students because it will determine the percentage of English language used. For example, Hispanic students who come from highly populated white area will have better English commands due to more interaction with Native American English speakers.

It is interesting as well when the writers mention that we can’t force them to perform in any language that they use in order to accurately assess them. In fact, teachers must provide opportunities for them to listen, speak, read and write in both languages. Teachers’ job is to listen and observe attentively to ensure accurate assessment. From the careful and accurate observations, then the teacher can determine either his/her students are dominant in Spanish or not, needs to work more on English vocabulary and etc. Most importantly, labeling them as slow, or any derogative remark is out of teaching ethics because it is lethal. It means, as teachers, students’ limited abilities to express themselves should not be a wall for us to not encourage them to use languages that they prefer. What we can do is to always encourage (without putting coercion) so that it will help them to low their affective filter.

There is no unique formula to teach Hispanic Students but there are ways to help us at least to build basic understanding of who they are. This will be the first step towards the success. The ways are closely integrated ranging from families (as their cultures are family and group oriented), economics, communities and cultural background. As teacher, it is wrong to be eccentric and denying the existence of our students culture. The actions will lead to miscommunication, ethnocentric judgments. It will shove away Hispanic students from us. In order to avoid that, teachers need to have concrete knowledge of particular culture in order to develop understanding of particular cultural group. Lacking concrete knowledge of Hispanic culture will lead to misinterpretation and assumptions. As a teacher, I don’t want that to happen because misinterpretation and assumptions are basically the key factor to denying the existence of particular cultural group.

There are factors that propagate the growth of Hispanics’ students learning. Firstly, teacher can provide education that fulfills the needs of them. This can be done by giving them access to opportunities and resources. For example, if they need more time to develop their CALP4, it should be taken seriously and granted as this will ensure their academic success. In this case, we must always remember the fact that teachers are nurturers. Secondly, avoiding stereotyping is a must as it can lead to teachers ignoring the fact that Hispanic cultures are rich in diversities. Also, teacher must have teaching strategies that related to the needs of Hispanic students. Among the strategies are:

a) Focusing the lessons on group rather than individual. Teacher must as well create a cooperative atmosphere in the classroom. This is a must for them because they have a strong sense of community. This can be done by having group problem solving, discussion in groups and etc. Due to this matter, it is wrong to punish them in public, this will devalue their pride.

b) Lessons must be highly informal too, ingrained with family-like atmosphere. I believe, eating together (with class members) by everybody participating in bringing food is one of the good methods to develop relationship and knowing each other better.

c) Having Hispanic Family Day or Hispanic Open House at school where Hispanic parents are invited to school. They can come to school for the sake of visiting without worrying about have to meet teachers discussing about their kids performance at school. It is a way to show hospitality of school administration where Hispanic Parents will be invited to have lunch or dinners (Hispanic food are prepared of course) with their kids’ respective teachers. This should be a yearly event where all of school communities anticipate in it. Hopefully this event will be catalysts for them (parent and teachers) to interact more in the future related to students’ achievement and improvement.

d) Teachers or school administration can develop social networking to promote assimilation and diversity. I get this idea from International Buddies program offered by Kansas State University. We can change it into Hispanic Buddies program so that it will give opportunity for Hispanic students in their transition and assimilation process. This program will be free. It is targeted so that it will improve their English skills. It can also provide free tutoring to the Hispanic students. They can meet an hour per week to discuss, do activities together.

Actually I am impressed when reading Fuller’s Author’s Note in page 102 whereby she instructed her preservice teachers to have significant relationship with Hispanic parents. This program managed to change perspective of her preservice white, middle class teachers. From their responses, Hispanic cultures are beautiful because they respect and value the teachers generally and emphasis on cleanliness which is as same as theirs. This is another great strategy to enhance cultural understanding between two different groups.

I believe Jones and Fuller are not just writers but they are practitioners of bilingual education. They put into practice whatever that they believe and write. I notice the theories, methodologies and applications in this book are deep seated and well matched the CEEE Guiding Principles (Center for Equity and Excellence in Education.) Each Hispanic student is unique (due to the fact that they are Culturally and Linguistically Diverse students or CLD), so any instruction should be build on their previous education and thus should not be neglected. They are welcomed, accepted and valued as they way they are. In order to fulfill the notions above, teacher must understand and apply the concepts, theories, research to that appropriate to them to help to learn in and out of classroom setting. It is a must for teachers to create a motivating learning environment and at the same time know and understand the variability of his/her students in learning academic subjects.

I do believe that the writers of this book try to combat negative views such as Hispanic students will be in failure category, left behind, hopelessness of any appropriate educational helps and risk of academic failure. I feel this happen not because of racism that entrenched within us but our failure to provide enough and good training on differential learning strategies and development of Hispanic group. In Malaysia, for those who major in education and plan to be teachers, Multicultural Education is not a core subject, it is just an elective, and thus it is not compulsory. I hope it will be made a compulsory subject for teachers to have it before they go to school teaching students. Hopefully, it will help to improve teachers’ attitudes towards racial and ethnic minorities. This is among the reformation process that I will do if I become a Malaysia Education policy maker one day. Wish me luck!!

As conclusion, both of the writers do a great job to instill cultural awareness in me. I am greatly indebted to them. In fact, their points of view must be and should be frameworks before we embrace Hispanic students.

I would like to end my reflective responses to this book by quoting Sonia Nieto’s statement which is available in page 29, “a constellation of attitudes, behaviors, behaviors, and structures and a mismatch between home and school expectations all work together to produce success or failure.”5

References:

1. A CQ Press College Division Publication. (2002) One Name, Many Communities:

Issues In Race, Ethnicity and Gender, Selections from The CW Researcher. CQ Press

174.

2. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Malcolm_X ( retrieved 10/6/2008)

3. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nezha_(deity) (retrieved 10/6/2008)

4. Herrera S. G, Murry K.G,.(2005) Mastering ESL and Bilingual Methods. Pearson

Education Inc. 9

5. Nieto,S (1992). Affirming diversity. New York: Longman

Aha>..

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I am going to start soon my journey in the field of education again as a student. This time for post graduate. It wil be totally different because usually every weekdays I will straining my vocal cords teaching my students. This time I am the one that has to really straining and strecthing my ear-drum, gulping, receiving and analyzing every information that pass throught it. This is going to be exciting and at the same time tiring..

It was 5 years ago I left INTEC,Uitm. I am overwhelming by this feeling seriously, so excited to meet new faces, discussing and reading and writing assignments, taking notes and etc. Indeed I am happy but at the same time I have a worry. Uneasiness starts to gradually build up in my soul, I dont want to be precisely as my friends that take Msc or Phd as Mona Lisa Potrait, rather I prefer myself to die because being one of them means among the first to be burnt in Hell. Nauzubillah…

Let be the knowledge or information is something that you live with it. Implementation and applying them will be(read must be) the foremost aim for those who seek to be in this path. Beeing a seeker of knowlegde is indeed hard.

Few days ago, I sat for EPT. This time for my own improvement. Overall, it was easy but what worried me most is Vocabulary Section which I found few words either I dont know the meaning or they were very rare or hardly to be found nowadays being used everywhere.

I went fishing with Ishak today, I caught a White Bass, went the same with Ishak. The different is that he got it first 30 minutes we were there and mine was slightly before we heading back. My technique( made  my own baits) did not work. The current was too strong, all the ” good smell” was carried away easily. So I could not catch any Catfish.

We have a new family member. His name is Nik. A post grad from USM. I am going to meet him tomorrow. Bye see ya..

Writing Effectively:part 2

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Creating Strong and Interesting Writing:(Part One)

How to do it? Easy, it is a piece of cake; writing will be interesting if you make it exactly as the way people speak. People speak use active sentences rather than passive sentences. It is simpler than written report. Let me give you few examples:

Passive:

I was told by my mother to go to buy some cookies.

Active:

My mother asked me to buy some cookies.

Important:

Anyway, passive voices are not all bad. They can be very useful when the doer of the action is unknown, the object is more important than the doer and when it is shorter than active sentences.

It is interesting to note that passive voice is definite and it is not being questioned and always Dictators write or speak using it. For example:

It has been noted that you will be fired by the end of this month.